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Bug #10633

Feature #8580: Installation Assistant

Feature #8590: Release beta version of web assistant

Improve content of final recommendations

Added by sajolida over 2 years ago. Updated over 2 years ago.

Status:
Resolved
Priority:
Elevated
Assignee:
-
Category:
Installation
Target version:
Start date:
11/24/2015
Due date:
% Done:

0%

QA Check:
Feature Branch:
web/10633-final-recommendations
Type of work:
End-user documentation
Blueprint:
Starter:
Affected tool:
Installation Assistant

Description

  • Remove subscription to amnesia-news [87] [88]
  • Reformulate how to mention upgrades [87]
  • Restructure final recommendations
  • Add link to warnings or documentation

final.png View (37.6 KB) sajolida, 12/16/2015 10:24 AM

green on purple.png View (38.3 KB) sajolida, 12/20/2015 10:04 AM

History

#1 Updated by sajolida over 2 years ago

  • Parent task set to #8590

#2 Updated by sajolida over 2 years ago

  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou
  • Feature Branch set to web/10633-final-recommendations

Ready as well.

#3 Updated by tchou over 2 years ago

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida
  • QA Check set to Info Needed

- I think that there is no help-browser.png image.
- the admon-caution.png is a link a leads to an the image itself
- Maybe we would like to open links in target _blank (I think we don't have a policy yet for that)
- we could have the images centered (I can do it once the img markup if fixed)
- "We hope you enjoy using Tails :)" As you know I'm not a good english speaker but shouldn't we use the future ?: "we hope that you will enjoy using Tails" ?

#4 Updated by sajolida over 2 years ago

  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou
  • Priority changed from Normal to Elevated
  • Target version changed from Tails_1.8 to Tails_2.0
  • QA Check changed from Info Needed to Dev Needed

- I think that there is no help-browser.png image.

Fixed in da6e866.

- the admon-caution.png is a link a leads to an the image itself

Fixed in 16601c5.

- Maybe we would like to open links in target _blank (I think we don't have a policy yet for that)

I don't know if that's possible in ikiwiki, see http://ikiwiki.info/wikilink.html. And using hardcoded HTML link is not an option as they would get broken as the final link depends on the context where the website is built (boum.org, offline documentation, etc.).

- "We hope you enjoy using Tails :)" As you know I'm not a good english speaker but shouldn't we use the future ?: "we hope that you will enjoy using Tails" ?

This is a present tense used for a general wish with no reference to any particular event in the future. See for example "We hope you enjoy your flight" in airplanes: http://www.airliners.net/aviation-forums/general_aviation/read.main/304809.

Assigning back to your for review and CSS.

Postponing as this won't be ready today.

#5 Updated by tchou over 2 years ago

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida
  • QA Check changed from Dev Needed to Pass

it's ready.

- _blank target does not seem to be an option
- for the present futur I was wondering if they where eating the "will", so they are not.

#6 Updated by sajolida over 2 years ago

  • File final.png View added
  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou
  • QA Check changed from Pass to Dev Needed

I reassigned it for you to work on the CSS as well. I think the current alignment of the two columns and especially the images is not really nice. See attachment. But maybe you want to do something more creative even.

#7 Updated by tchou over 2 years ago

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida
  • QA Check changed from Dev Needed to Ready for QA

done in 34a90506802953aede96d2799a317ca6cc6f243d and ce81b86d67f06bd374f2039ecdbe8bd86a783fc0.

#8 Updated by sajolida over 2 years ago

  • File green on purple.png View added
  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou
  • QA Check changed from Ready for QA to Dev Needed

I think the current purple background is problematic, and for two reasons:

  1. The links are now green on purple which makes them hard to ready.
  2. So far we're associate dark purple background with actionnable items (buttons) while these are not.

Maybe try with a clearer background?

Attaching a screenshot of the current design.

#9 Updated by tchou over 2 years ago

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida
  • QA Check changed from Dev Needed to Ready for QA

I changed links to white. I definitly like the deep contrast with the purple background and I think it's not a big deal, while it's an actionnable section.

#10 Updated by sajolida over 2 years ago

  • Status changed from Confirmed to Resolved
  • Assignee deleted (sajolida)
  • QA Check deleted (Ready for QA)

I fixed a bunch of issues with 16601c5..1604a5e and merged this. Feel free to review.

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